rainyshinydays: Crude drawing of JJ Rocker from Rhythm Heaven. (Default)
galaxyfantasy ([personal profile] rainyshinydays) wrote in [personal profile] kalechipskid 2024-10-17 12:18 am (UTC)

whoaa, these are super good...the short sentences that feel like bulleted lists and switching between topics is great, it has a chaotic feeling to it, perfectly portrays the racing thoughts. the s-panzers also sound very unsettling. im surprised anyone can pilot them. really good, your writing style is awesome!

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