Date: 2024-10-17 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rainyshinydays
whoaa, these are super good...the short sentences that feel like bulleted lists and switching between topics is great, it has a chaotic feeling to it, perfectly portrays the racing thoughts. the s-panzers also sound very unsettling. im surprised anyone can pilot them. really good, your writing style is awesome!
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